I want to know if this poem is good or bad?

Modern Christmas

I wake upon Christmas day
To find a red bottom mixed with charcoal grey
Stuck in my chimney chute
Kicking around with its big black boots

I hear the neigh of reindeers
I knew he was real! I knew he was real!
And then he came down
With his long white beard he looked like a clown

With his big belly and sack of gifts (I hoped)
"I need to lose some weight" he joked
Ho! Ho! Ho! Who do we have here?
Hi! My name is Flare.

And have you been a good girl this year Flare?
Yes! Yes! I have taken care of fur
I helped mummy water the garden
And ate all my apples.

Ho! Ho! Ho! Very good, very good
So what do you want this, flare? Toys? Food?
No! I want… I want
I want an IPhone 5.

Lol
So true, wouldn't mind one myself
Nice satyrical twist at the end
Broke rhythm a few times

No poem is good or bad
Simply a poem
With its own style and rhythm, it's own message and meaning

Poems are only works in progress

I read an amasing poem once that was only 3 sylables long