Is the wording of this sentence awkward?
"She had listened to music on her iPhone for the entire rest of the trip - over two hours, as there was traffic inside the city."
Any recommendations on how I can improve it?
She listened to the music for the rest of the trip, which took over two hours because of all the traffic in the city.
You could say, "She listened to music on her iPhone for the entire rest of the trip - over two hours as there was traffic in the city."
She was listening to music for more than 2hours on her iPhone for the entire trip due to the traffic.
She listened to music on her iPhone for the rest of the trip - more than two hours because of the traffic.
'the entire rest' sounds awkward. Just say 'the rest'.
'- over two hours, as the traffic in the city was heavy'
- Would this honestly be awkward? I can't deny I have strong feelings for my guy friend (best friend to me.) This is kinda random-but I miss him much we both go to college-we have hung out a lot since but now it's been awhile. Having his picture as my wallpaper on my iPhone helps me get through those days. It's one of him looking up and smiling while laying back down I cropped the photo from one of his youth outings. How would he react if he accidentally saw that on my iPhone?
- What happened on Awkward. Episode 203 three s a crowd? I have directv & they took MTV off air & I love the show Awkward. I wasn't able to watch last weeks episode & I'm really bummed! Is there a website that I can either read what happened or possibly watch the full free episode on an iPhone?
- Please correct the sentence? I seriously don't want to buy any phone now. As i have started going to office full time, i realize how hard it is to earn money so now i don't like wasting money on such things. Its better to save money but whenever i will new phone it will an iphone for sure
- Larceny by conversion sentence for someone with no record at all? I had a customer come in and drop their broken iPhone 5 phone off to repair the broken screen. They signed a contract stating after 30 days the phone is mine to do what I want with it. I sold the phone on eBay after almost 2 months without any contact from the guy. I'm being charged with Larceny By Conversion $200 more but less than $1000. What is the normal sentence for something like this for someone with no record at all and what can I do? I'm in Sanilac County, Michigan.