Is this opening strong and engaging?
Miss Fisher's eyes snapped open with sudden shock gasping, it all happened in slow motion as her brand new iPhone slipped from her baby soft, French-manicured nails, clattering on the jumbled desk.
Its just for a story I just wanna know if its engaging or if I should improve on it
Its ok I write alote of poetry but needs some fixing
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