What do you guys think of my rap?

I recorded it on an iPhone sorry audio quality isn't 100%. So my friends tell me I'm pretty good at this stuff, but they're my friends so ya know lol. I wanted to know some unbiased opinions about what you guys think of my rapping skills. I've been doing it as a hobby for a while. Here's a cover interpretation of drake/lil Wayne's "she will" with a freestyle at the end. Lemme know what you think honestly.

http://www.smule.com/p/255512114_80693605

You're good but you sound like everybody else. Things to work on:
1. Your own style
2. Annunciation
other than that you're good

Not bad. Have heard worse. However, you need to work on your flow. It almost sounded like you were reading from a lyrics sheet. Your tone is above average, which is what your friends are reacting to more than anything else.

You are good. You should improve your flow. You know try to be on the beat more. On the second part you did better on that but at the start it felt like you weren't really "on the beat". You sounded good but if you actually want to do this as a job you have to have your own style. I know, this was not your song so you couldn't be that creative but try writing lyrics on your own and see how it goes. You sound like many other rappers so try to find something special and original about your style that separates you from the others. But good job.

It's good